So, I’ve finished five pages of depths to a degree that I’m comfortable letting people look at them. The dialogue isn’t 100% final, but I want to get this out into the wild in part so that I can get feedback, but also so that I can sort of make the whole thing more real.
I’ve learned a lot in the first day of making things, such as techniques to improve the quality of renders (I figured how to get rid of that annoying wrinkle that constantly formed on Abagail’s crotch, for one…) as well as how to use Photoshop to lay out comic dialogue (it’s harder than you might think).
Now that I have the tools down, however, I think I can actually start to really get going on producing the story. I think the first chapter should be about thirty pages or so. I’m aiming for that so I just have an idea of what my goal is.
Here’s the link to check out the first few pages. Please feel free to post a comment, or shoot me an email at Tri3Ax@gmail.com with any feedback.